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Did he come free with 2 clip on bow ties?

He doesn't look very Thai.

Quote: zooo @ January 13 2011, 7:13 PM GMT

He doesn't look very Thai.

You haven't seen my vagina

Cheers for the kind words, feel free to keep them coming. From now on this should be a regular Monday thing, although so far this week there has been nothing worth writing about.

SootyJ, feel free to pimp away, don't listen to Nat cos she is mentally disturbed

Quote: Schwen @ January 13 2011, 7:28 PM GMT

You haven't seen my vagina

I've met Nat and what a disrespectful term for her!

OI. Shower if c**ts (not Zooo).

I'm an arsehole do I still need to shower?

I read the article, but didn't find it too interesting. You only skim over the very basics of the program, so it seems very ordinary.

Ben you are becoming the fearless voice of true criticism

I can't say that doesn't sting a little bit, but I appreciate the constructive nature of your criticism. As you rightly mentioned I'm mainly doing it for a bit of fun and have never written before (I know, it shows).

I skim over a lot because the article is not intended to go into any real depth and is more an opinion piece as opposed to the couple of reviews I have done for the site, I try to keep it short and cover as much stuff as possible (a bit hard over the past couple of weeks given the scheduling).

I shall definitely be taking some of this on board though and appreciate the feedback, I'm not looking to become a career reviewer but I do enjoy doing this and hope it improves my writing skills as a whole as well as making people laugh.

That said, I hate you all.

My second op piece "And then I untied her.. Is edgy the new hack?" is up on GiggleBeats. I don't want any feedback unless it's good, because I don't care about self improvement ;)

http://www.gigglebeats.co.uk/2011/01/"and-then-i-untied-her"-is-'edgy'-the-new-'hack'/

That was good, Nat!
I have no bad feedback to not give. ;)

Get considered critique from the elusive Grifalloe (one of the few intellects on this site) is high praise indeed.

Zooo likes everything, she even likes Aaron.

So most of the rest of us on here are dumb? Nice going, Sooty!

It is true.

Quote: Matthew Stott @ January 16 2011, 3:17 PM GMT

So most of the rest of us on here are dumb? Nice going, Sooty!

Well I am and an unashamed

Haven't made my mind up about you yet Stott. You're bright but lack control, like Hayden Christian in Attack of the Clones.

Godot is another intellect.

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