Hi guys this an amateur trailer of my new production which ive been working on called 'Them 3', could everyone please check it out and give me some feedback please.
Bare in mind this is an extended trailer so please tell me what you think
Links below
I missed Them 2. Does this one still have the giant ants?
what was them 2? check out the YouTube link I posted
Quote: Mark W @ December 24 2010, 10:15 AM GMTI missed Them 2. Does this one still have the giant ants?
Quote: Dapaah 123 @ December 26 2010, 3:31 AM GMTwhat was them 2? check out the YouTube link I posted
Yes, Mark W. and stop posting funny comments.
P.S. Your comment was highly amusing though.
Getting back on topic, the three boys look good on camera but I think you'd get more responses if you cut the first 50-odd seconds off the start of the vid. The scenes outside the cafe aren't funny (to me) and many people will click the X long before the boys get to the cafe.
Once inside the cafe, things improve considerably and the subsequent scenes are good too.
I can see these three guys becoming popular with young audiences.
Technically there are some sound issues and I think the whole thing could be tightened up a bit. Love the guys looking at the girl in the cafe; their different expressions and body language gives us an idea of their characters, as does the dance. I would develop that more. Focus on how the difference between them impacts on their friendship. Audiences like to identify or empathise with particular characters and are then drawn in to find out what will happen next. Once personalities and circumstances are clear, it becomes more interesting to discover how they will react in certain situations and how their friendship will be affected.
i really appreciate the feedback guys I will keep developing this till it becomes quality