INT. KITCHEN. JESUS IS IN HIS KITCHEN FIXING HIMSELF SOMETHING TO EAT. THERE IS A SOUND OF TOAST POPPING UP, HE PUTS MARGE ON A KNIFE AND GRABS THE TOAST. HE THEN GAZES AT THE TOAST INTENSELY FOR QUITE A FEW SECONDS. JESUS: Christ..... I could do with a shave.
Would make a good comic strip.
Cheers Leevil
Nice.
Attracted to read this by the name of it alone and I thought it was good. Simple in and out with a good punch.
That is a corker.
Very good.
Bo.
Nice on Nigel 
Nice and simple. Well done.
Like. Could be a one-panel comic strip.
Thanks people of the cyberworld.
Oh this is nice. Short, to the point and very funny. Well done.
Funny.
Very funny indeed Nigel. As others have said, would make a good cartoon strip.
Unless of course, you're really Veronica Vestibule, in which case it's rubbish. 