JPM1
Tuesday 7th December 2010 10:17am [Edited]
London
117 posts
After much debate on this post I looked forward to the final episode with as open a mind as I could conjure. Several posters here suggested that we couldn't judge the work until it was complete, well, now it is, and I am very glad for it.
There were some very fine moments in this episode:
Brydon shouting "you're stuck in a metaphor!"
Coogan pondering the Oscar vs. sick child conundrum.
Rob singing his 3 octaves (I laughed out loud)
Coogan arriving home to his empty flat contrasted with Brydon's warm family-filled home.
But, even with all those lovely moments, I think the episode (and the series as a whole) falls short.
First, the episde had a ton of fat that could have been trimmed. These long scenes of coogan doing Brydon's eulogy, or the winner takes it all scene just dragged on for me. Most of teh scene with Coogan's parents felt really extraneous - it wasn't funny, it didn't move the action forward, it didn't reveal anything to us about coogan's character.... why was it there?
Even little exchanges like "The car doors are locked", "Oh sorry I thought I pushed the button" are just a waste of page space - I'd bet that any writer on this forum could come up with ten alternate exchanges that would have been better.
In the end, coogan turns down the HBO gig in favour of being in England with his kids. (We'll ignore the totaly implausible "7 year contract" - as if everything HBO makes gets renewed for 7 seasons.) So is that what Coogan's journey was about? Then why didn't we spend real time on it? Why didn't we meet a kid until episode 5? If we're supposed to believe that his kids are important to him we should have dealt with that issue in a more substantive way.
What was the effect of the journey on Brydon's character? We have no idea... In the end his passive character remained passive and was unaffected by the events of the episode or series.
I've gone on about this before but I'll do it again - if you're going to set things up - you have to play them out - all these little elements in the beginning are just cast aside and forgotten - the eulogy, the poem, the fence jumping... dropped threads = lazy writing.
I will concede to my fellow posters a couple of things. First, it was actually kind of moving in the end. But I'd argue that pulling heart strings is easy... a little music... a lonely man... some wistful looks at old movies on an iPhone 4.. It doesn't take much.
Also, I'll concede that what Coogan claimed to have wanted, and what he actually needed (fame versus sincere connection) did collide in the end fulfilling a tenet of the classical paradigm. I just wish it had been handled better. Why did we waste so much time on other stuff that had nothing to do with addressing that issue?
There was a lot of beauty in this series but there was a lot of filler and ultimately I remain disappointed.