British Comedy Guide

Mouse (Sketch)

A very short sketch by a stand-up called Jay Cowle, featuring myself and filmed by the award-winning David Bussell

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=999yOx4PXjM

Weird but good, I think. Interesting effects. Nice to see role reversal. :)

It was good to finally get that award-winning David Bussell behind the camera.

yeah cool stuff, liked it. not sure why one guy and his side of the room had the effect though?

That's just the way the office is.

But actually because it's to visually represent Mark being in a whole different world to the other guy.

Good solid joke here - made me lol. Stuart's acting always cracks me up - which is a good thing.

Lose the line art filter - it adds nothing and clouds the joke.

Quote: Swansonite @ October 28 2010, 12:09 PM BST

yeah cool stuff, liked it. not sure why one guy and his side of the room had the effect though?

ok yeah fair enough, I see what you mean

Quote: Godot Taxis @ October 29 2010, 6:39 AM BST

Good solid joke here - made me lol. Stuart's acting always cracks me up - which is a good thing.

Lose the line art filter - it adds nothing and clouds the joke.

Thanks Godot, I think I agree about the filter. But the day I finished the edit I thought it was good. Oh well.

I'd lose the filter. There's a bit of mumbled dialogue while you're OS - I'd clip too.

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