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Guess I should add that this is a sketch.
And a pretty funny one.
Did you shoot it too, or just dub it?
Quote: Kevin Murphy @ October 26 2010, 9:48 AM BSTAnd a pretty funny one.
Did you shoot it too, or just dub it?
Just ripped it off YouTube and redubbed it with some new music. I had to edit the footage quite heavily though.
Yeh liked it mate. Not overly long just enough. Top stuff.
Quote: Gavin @ October 26 2010, 9:56 AM BSTYeh liked it mate. Not overly long just enough. Top stuff.
Cheers, bro-bag.
Nice little parody Mr B. It had some great lines, the long way round a darts match being my fave.
Small niggles, It could have started about 10 seconds in for me. I know it was setting the tone but it just felt too long. And the look into this puppy's eyes shot was too quick, even if you had to slow-mo the footage to make it fit, that is an important shot for the parody.
Quote: ShoePie @ October 26 2010, 12:11 PM BSTNice little parody Mr B. It had some great lines, the long way round a darts match being my fave.
Small niggles, It could have started about 10 seconds in for me. I know it was setting the tone but it just felt too long. And the look into this puppy's eyes shot was too quick, even if you had to slow-mo the footage to make it fit, that is an important shot for the parody.
Both good observations. I'll do another cut and see how it comes out.
I liked that. Thought you could lose the last 8 seconds though. The fade-out of the woman and dog leaving the house seemed like a natural ending. I didn't think the hotline number after that added anything.
Thanks, Yacob - good point. I've taken yours and Kerry's advice, shaved a full 13 seconds from the original cut and it's much better for it. Here...
Very good Dave. But over it goes to critique! 
Quote: Leevil @ October 27 2010, 12:18 AM BSTVery good Dave. But over it goes to critique!
But I'm done with critique now! This is the final effort!
Looking Good!
I thought critique was just for written stuff now and showcase for videos and podcasts? After all you're always going to want (and get!) feedback wherever you post it. Me so confused.
Critique is for works in progress.
Showcase is for showing off the finished product.
My mistake was to put this in Showcase when it wasn't ready but as it's finished now I really think it belongs there. People are going to offer critique whenever a piece is posted (nothing wrong with that) but this is a locked cut now.