Your guess as to why I do these things is as good as mine...
Bathwater of the Gods 6
It needs bigger writing or an exclamation mark in the final pane.
You are nuts btw.
Take you point that the writing is a bit small. No need for an exclamation mark at the end though - I wrote it as the barbarian deliberately whispering in order to lure her to her doom. He's kind of a dick like that.
Ah, then it's fine.
I didn't see it as being deliberate.
But it's funny either way.
I do think bigger writing would give it a nice sarky twist
Otherwise aces as ever
It's pretty funny this one.
Brilliant, but I'd add a little emphasis on the last pane.
I SAID "Mind the tank".
I like it.
Quote: Steve Sunshine @ October 2 2010, 9:23 PM BSTI didn't see it as being deliberate.
But it's funny either way.
I think it would make more sense if you were to follow the series week by week. He's always being a dick.
Quote: sootyj @ October 2 2010, 11:29 PM BSTI do think bigger writing would give it a nice sarky twist
Otherwise aces as ever
Take the point that just the words "mind that tank" could be funnier if presented larger. I'll have a think on it.
Quote: Nigel Kelly @ October 2 2010, 11:54 PM BSTIt's pretty funny this one.
YES! *high-fives self*
Quote: Nat Wicks @ October 2 2010, 11:56 PM BSTBrilliant, but I'd add a little emphasis on the last pane.
I SAID "Mind the tank".
Thanks for the input, weirdo.
Quote: Leevil @ October 3 2010, 1:43 AM BSTI like it.
Everything I do, I do it for you.
Amended according to your kind suggestions...
How about...
I said "Mind that tank".
If you get my meaning. Make the last line the same size as the first pane.
Edit: Actually, that is bollocks, sorry. 
Coolio it's even better.
Great stuff.
I would have ruined it by adding a double entendere on "mind that tank" and "I'm having a wank" but then I ruin most things.
Even cheese on toast.