A Few Sketches

Hello one and all,
First things first, my name's Nick. I've just stumbled across this forum and it looks like a great place to trade ideas on writing comedy - something that I'm intrigued by!
I feel a bit cheeky asking as this is my first post, but here's a few sketches I've written over the last couple of months. I'd greatly appreciate any critique if anyone has the time (who knows - you may get a laugh out of it to boot). The first couple contain the same characters, Steve & Eddy - I'd like to perhaps write a sitcom about these two and their daily failures in love, lust and.. everything else. The other two are just a couple of random ones.

Thanks in advance!

I've linked to them so as not to make a huge thread.

Steve & Eddy - The Birthday Present

http://freetexthost.com/jcrkhyxz2r

Steve & Eddy - First Impressions

http://freetexthost.com/0lwmj1n43b

George

http://freetexthost.com/qgln35sovd

A Monk's Life

http://freetexthost.com/pgx6thyvdn

Welcome to the board!

I can't open them because of the webfilters on the work systems.

You'd probably be better posting the text itself. Put a different sketch in each thread (Don't post them all at once though!) and you'll probably get better feedback than posting links to several sketches in one go.