Cheers, Stott. It's not perfect by any means but I'm pretty happy with it. It's got a sort of Viz appeal I think.
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Quote: Griff @ August 31 2010, 12:53 PM BSTThe language is wrong for Viz as it stands, I think. You wouldn't see phrases like "I'm not huffing a pants pulse" in Viz. Nor Americanisms like "Hit on someone your own size, lady".
But if you colloquialised it into Viz-speak it'd be worth sending to them.
Take your point. I didn't mean I'd actually submit it to Viz - just that it shared a similar puerile sensibility. The Americanisms seemed appropriate as the images used were largely culled from trans-Atlantic safety cards.
Quote: Griff @ August 31 2010, 1:00 PM BSTOr you could get Stott and Ringo on the case and create an animated voice-over version for your sketch show?
You know, that's something I was genuinely thinking about exploring were Missing Scene to go to series...
You know what, the one I was thinking of was road signs, not safaety cards.
Go for your life.
I like it! 'Astral Travel, Nigel away!' made me LOL. You could definitely lose 4 of the panels as some of the images are so similar.
I think just doing the 12, instead of 16. will tighten it up nicely.
I wasn't too keen on the gremlin, but loved the parchute panels.
Loved the "Die happy kid" & "Hit on someone your own size lady".
Quote: AngieBaby @ August 31 2010, 8:32 PM BSTI like it! 'Astral Travel, Nigel away!' made me LOL. You could definitely lose 4 of the panels as some of the images are so similar.
I think just doing the 12, instead of 16. will tighten it up nicely.
I wasn't too keen on the gremlin, but loved the parchute panels.
Thanks for taking a look, Angie. For me, the panels without jokes are important to the narrative. For instance, would the bit with her putting the oxygen mask on before realising it's a duck bill be as funny without the set-up panel? My feeling is no.
Quote: Charley @ September 1 2010, 12:37 AM BSTLoved the "Die happy kid" & "Hit on someone your own size lady".
Cheers, Charley.
It gave me a chuckle.
Bo.
Quote: Bohannon @ September 1 2010, 5:07 PM BSTIt gave me a chuckle.
Bo.
Happy to hear it, Bo.
Somewhat amusing. Well done, it looks well.
Quote: Leevil @ September 2 2010, 10:24 AM BSTSomewhat amusing. Well done, it looks well.
Exactly what the midwife said to my mother.