http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sfqUzrZYd2Q
Check this guy out! He's bloody brilliant!
Craziest cooking show ever!
I'm sure you are Jericho! 
Welcome.
1 Should be in Critique. You'll just piss people off posting in the wrong forum.
2 It's well filmed and it's a good idea and you're a good actor. But 10 minutes is far too long and it's way too linear. E.g. sad man makes sad meal. Give him a back story you allude to or something.
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Welcome to the site Jerry.
Only got 3 minutes in before I got fed up I'm afraid.
Not only did I wheeze hysterically but by the end I'd reached such a level of intimacy with the character that I was saying things like "ahaaastarshapesagain" to myself.
I recommend anyone who didn't see this through to go back to it, it's slow burning (pretty literally actually) but well worth it.
I like the concept and the 'mature' gentlemen acts well, but it's a bit too slow burning for me and I stopped watching shortly after the 'trainers in the fridge' section.
Too slow burning for me, I'm aftaid Jericho. As Sooty said, 10 mins is far too long, and it is basically one (possibly 2) jokes in that time.