I thought the first one wasn't funny. Good production values video wise.
It could have been funny if you just had the men all chasing the girl but then something funny happens. As it is, no. Crap. In fact I can't imagine what the f**k you think you're doing with the ending on that one?
I'll try the next one.
Better. I think you have the potential to be funny. Maybe it's a cultural thing. These vids may be the funniest thing since sliced *insert whatever Norwegians use for bread here* in Norway but they need work. It might be funnier if you spoke in Norwegian and used subtitles? The sound was horrendous btw compared to the video production. If you are going to make a big effort with the video then don't forget that the audio is just as important.
I'll try the third one.
F**k me, rape again. No boys, try and look elsewhere for your gags. I like the idea of spoofing commercials and you produced this one well, but not with rape, not funny. Unless you're dorks?
Can't end on a downer, I'll try the fourth one.
Much better this one. It made me laugh. I'd cut a bit more in the edit to shorten it though, but not by much. I quite liked the acting in this one. The girl was good, and for once, wasn't assaulted or insulted! Well done! Remember boys, be respectful to girls, even in comedy videos!
Btw mock France in your sketches, not England! Or Aaron will have you!
P.S. Given the quality of Nowegian TV (which just has to dire, right?) you probably have a good chance of getting your own show in due course!
