British Comedy Guide

You can do it George.

WE SEE GEORGE SITTING OPPOSITE HIS DOCTOR.

DOCTOR:
Mr Meyer, It's very simple. If you don't lose some weight, and quickly then I'm afraid that you may not see your next Birthday.

GEORGE: (LOOKS DETERMINED)
I understand Doc!

THE ROCKY MUSIC BEGINS
AND WE SEE A MONTAGE OF GEORGE.
WE SEE HIM LIFTING A WEIGHTS BAR & PUTTING IT IN THE CUPBOARD.
HE CRACKS 4 EGGS INTO A PINT GLASS.. LOOKS AT IT & ADDS A RASHER OF BACON.
HE IS THEN SITTING ON THE SOFA WATCHING TELLY.
HE GRABS A BEER FROM THE FRIDGE.
HE SITS ON THE SOFA DRINKING A BEER.
HE GRABS ANOTHER BEER FROM THE FRIDGE & SOME CHICKEN.
HE IS BACK ON THE SOFA DRINKING BEER & EATING CHICKEN.

CUT TO A FUNERAL
WE SEE TWO MOURNERS NEXT TO EACH OTHER.

MOURNER 1:
That was always Georges problem, he never quite understood Montages.

END

:D Hahaha like it.

Lovely.

Clever

That's superb. I want to see it filmed. Seriously. PM me.

Very good - maybe draw out the montage a little longer?

Proper good. Adding the bacon to the raw eggs was a highlight for me. The punch is very strong too. Nice.

Haha, very good :)

:D

Excellent.

I did like the eggs and bacon line. How about a few more like this

for example,

HE WASHES SOME SALAD, PICKS IT UP, FEEDS IT TO A RABBIT AND THEN GRABS AND STARTS EATING A HUGE KEBAB

Damn fine sketch! A 'sketch-writers' sketch!

Very good!

Yeah, excellent. Get onto Bussell who has the muscle to make it. Or bypass that and make it yourself. Very funny.

the eggs bit was obvious as its been done before, but still a great sketch.

You need a slice of familiarity to draw in with any skit.

Comedy is all about the familiar unfamiliar.

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