Hi 
Well out of practice so any opinions very welcome indeed.
INT. BAR. NIGHT.
A WOMAN WALKS (KAREN) FROM THE BAR TO HER SEAT. SHE BUMPS INTO A SWAN (MIKE).
KAREN:
Sorry. You ok?
SWAN.
Karen?
KAREN:
Sorry do I know you?
MIKE:
It's me, Mike.
KAREN:
Mike! Wow, didn't recognise you. You look different. Look well.
MIKE:
Tell me about it. Woke up one day looked in a frozen pond and there I was.
KAREN:
Crazy huh...look I didn't mean to hurt you..
MIKE:
Well you did. I mean..I expected it from all the birds but you? You know how hard it was for me. I told you how my family treated me just because I was different, how they told me to get out, quack quack, get out, quack quack, get out of town.
KAREN:
I know and I am really sorry. I did look for you at the farm but they said you'd moved. Listen...call me if you want we could...
MIKE:
Yeah now I'm the best in town? I don't think so Karen. Listen I'm here with some friends so err...been good to see you.
KAREN:
Yeah good to see you too.
MIKE WALKS OVER TO A TABLE WHERE A BUNCH OF SWANS ARE DRINKING AND TALKING.
SWAN:
Hey Mike.
MIKE:
Hey Phil. Honk.
ALL THE SWANS:
Honk honk honk honk honk.
MIKE LOOKS BACK AT KAREN FORLORNLY WHO IS NOW SITTING WITH FRIENDS.
END.
