Bathwater of the Gods - Pirates!
Didn't do anything for me, David. Personally, I always like these 3 frame comic things to have a completely insane ending that makes very little sense. Like perhaps you could inexplicably turn into a bike to your shipmate's horror.
Or have Abu Hamza as the shipmate.
Now that's a shame, I was sure that was funny. Sure enough to sink a few hours into photo sourcing and shopping anyway. Oh well, on to the next one...
It's not bad, but not as good as the first two.
It's a little to badoomtish but runners lose a little steam on the 3rd one. Also the other 2 were about perverted sex so your changing the formula
It wasn't meant to be a perverted sex runner, though I can certainly see why you would think it was since I presented two comics on that theme in a row. Oh well, if ever I make enough good ones of these to justify a collection I'll make sure I don't run those two back to back. Cheers for the feedback, all.
Quote: sootyj @ July 13 2010, 10:30 AM BSTIt's a little to badoomtish but runners lose a little steam on the 3rd one. Also the other 2 were about perverted sex so your changing the formula
Everyone's allowed a vanity project now and then
I think because the other 2 were more laugh out load this suffers, probably if it was the first one it'd get a better re-action.
Quote: dannyjb1 @ July 13 2010, 12:56 PM BSTEveryone's allowed a vanity project now and then
I think because the other 2 were more laugh out load this suffers, probably if it was the first one it'd get a better re-action.
Your talking about the sculpture of yourself your making from corned beef aren't you?
It needs a better hook David.
Quote: dannyjb1 @ July 13 2010, 12:56 PM BSTEveryone's allowed a vanity project now and then
I think because the other 2 were more laugh out load this suffers, probably if it was the first one it'd get a better re-action.
Fair point, Danny. Cheers for taking a look.
Quote: Marc P @ July 13 2010, 1:01 PM BSTIt needs a better hook David.
And out he springs like a coiled pun panther! (punther?)
I said deck!
Can somebody grab my wheal!
The last time I saw one as big as that it was on a whale!
Why is your head always stiff Cap'n?