Hello, I really enjoyed watching this, it felt full of warmth and good humour and I hope it attracts all the interest it deserves. Good luck with it!
RE: What are your thoughts on the clip?
0:04 I would change it slightly i.e freeze Mr Adebanjo differently, so that the narrator doesn't speak over his dialogue?
0:20 to 0:24 To me it felt a little bit out of place looping this part?
0:52 to 0:55 You can't hear the arguement between Sade and the guy next to her because of the narration. I think just having an exasperated reaction shot from the guy to camera would be more than enough to get their characters / relationship firmly established, plus you could freeze it and tell us his name?
Finally I thought that the improvised like dialogue at 01:48 was dificult to follow the first time round so reduced the impact of the rest of the trailer slightly?
Anyway that said I enjoyed it regardless of any of the suggested tweaks above. So what was my point? Hmmmm