I had a go at some comedy a year ago or so, wondered if anyone else has tried this just as a hobby. Here is a link to something I did.
Let me know what you think and post anything you have done.
Ammeter Comedy
Moving thread to the Critique forum.
This was well done, if a bit long, but I did laugh at at some of this. I think it would have been funnier if the bloke didn't know what was going to happen (at a friend's house or hotel etc.)