British Comedy Guide

Silent Quickie

INT: CHURCH

CONGREGATION ARE ON THEIR KNEES, PRAYING.

A LARGE MECHANICAL CLAW MOVES ALONG THE CELING, FIRST DIAGONALLY, THEN VERTICALLY.
THE CLAW STOPS AND DROPS TO PICK UP A MAN BY THE HEAD.

THE CLAW RETURNS TO THE CEILING, THE MAN'S LEGS WRIGGLE FRANTICALLY, THEN HE FALLS AND SPLATTERS ON THE FLOOR.

CUT TO: GOD KICKING AN ARCADE GAME IN ANGER.

Nice.

Very nice. I like that, but it would probably need to sit amongst other things to find a home.

Class

One of the best sketches ever posted in Critique. A real pleasure to read.

Very very good indeed.

Fab

Another Angie Classic.

Nice one, Angie. Agree with Giggle-o though-o.

Laughing out loud

My kind of comedy.

Thanks for the feedback everyone.

I've got a couple of ideas around the theme, just need to get to grips with the animation software I bought months ago and have done nothing with.

Which software was that?

Nice; I notice you mention animation, it did pop into my head in a Family Guy style whilst I was reading it.

Quote: Leevil @ May 21 2010, 1:28 PM BST

Which software was that?

Anime studio

Can you draw Angie? I'm looking at some stuff myself, but my drawing is even worse then my writing.

I've got a couple of ideas for workarounds, but I'm not sure if some software really helps the shitty artist out?

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