In my head it seemed a harmless, funny sketch. On paper I'm unsure and think maybe its not wise to touch on the subject in a jokey way and , more importantly, just isn't anywhere near as funny as it was in my head.
Would I be right in throwing this one out?
LIVING ROOM. INT
BOB is a camp sounding man, who has a distinguishably excited tone. BOB 2 is much more straight talking.
Bob 2:
Ready then Bob?
Bob:
Yep. Wait a sec.
Bob stops and examines his pockets, crossing his hands over from top pockets to jeans; back pocket; front pocket.
BOB:
Key. Money. Mobile. Rape alarm. Wallet.
BOB 2:
What?!
Bob repeats his actions slowly, emphasising the items.
BOB:
Key.. Money.. Mobile.. Rape alarm.. Wallet.
BOB 2:
(shocked)
What was that last one?
Bob:
Wallet?
BOB 2:
Before that.
BOB:
Mobile.
BOB 2:
No. Between mobile and wallet.
BOB:
(confused)
I don't think there was one was there?
BOB 2:
There definitely was. Back pocket.
BOB:
Oh! Yes. I am a silly sausage.(tuts) Rape alarm.
BOB 2:
You carry a rape alarm?
BOB:
Yeah. Don't you?
BOB 2:
Of course not.
BOB:
Oh Bob you simply HAVE to get one. They're brilliant!
BOB 2:
I think they're meant for women.
BOB:
No, no, no, silly. Definitely for forgetful men like me. Best £50 I've spent since that Boy George concert.
BOB 2:
Forgetful?
Bob:
Oh yeah Bob, I'm always forgetting things me. I'd forget me 'ed if it weren't screwed on.
BOB 2:
But why do you need a -
BOB:
Take last Saturday nigh for example.
BOB 2:
Right...
Bob:
Me and the lads went clubbing, as usual, and you know how it is. We've had a few.
BOB 2:
Naturally.
BOB:
Naturally, yes. And there's some really nice looking girls about. So I get dancing with a few , get a few new numbers and have a great time.
BOB 2:
Where's the problem then?
BOB:
Ahh you see, after I left. I was a little worse for wear, I literally didn't know what was happening. I was in a very vulnerable state, you know, anybody could've had their wicked way with me.
BOB 2:
You should know your limits.
Bob:
And as I stumbled down this alley, thinking it was just me and this girl in front, who had the most amazing green shoes you'll ever see, and looked equally worse for wear.-
BOB 2:
Someone jumped out on you?
BOB:
No, no, no. I went straight home. Didn't even think about taking advantage.