Battle of Britain = The Re Run

Hollywood blockbuster trailer. Lots of footage of Spitfires, Hurricanes swooshing through the air.

VO : This Autumn. Coming to a theatre, village hall or primary school near you. The Battle of Britain - The re run.

More shots of dogfights.

VO : A wounded, half blind, war weary pilot battles to cling on to his dream of leading his decimated squadron to victory.

Gordon Brown in flying gear looking heroic.

Caption : Starring Eric Pickles as Winston Churchill and Peter Mandleson as Adolf Hitler.

More shot of spitfires chasing stukkas and the like.

VO : But one young flight commander will not be moved from his destiny.

David Cameron in flying gear looking even more heroic.

Caption : Introducing Nick Fargage as Flying Officer F**kup.

VO : Supported by his trusty batman, he makes his move for command.

Nick Clegg dressed as batman with David Cameron.

Clegg : Shall I press your underpants Sir?

Caption : And Nick Griffin as the sacked SS Stormtrooper.

VO : Who will emerge as the victor?

Spitfire doing a victory roll.

I don't like seeing posts with no replies so:...

Personally, I think this would work quite nicely. The way the politicians are all hero'ed up.

It's a good image.

I like it.

I don't like seeing posts with only one comment. Our efforts deserve at least, two. By the way, Cameron was the victor - or at least that's what they said on the news in Spain. The idea's got wings but you may have a plausibility problem with a 'flying' Gordon Brown. Most things he was behind never got off the ground, and those that did crashed on take-off! Love your historics, nice niche, if you don't mine me saying so.

I like the idea.
But I found it a bit crowded, I had to read it a few times.
Some good bits in there though.

It's good, but not as flowing as your other stuff. Loved 'Flying Office F**kup' though.