Funny stuff.
Really nice idea.
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Yeah, not bad. Like the switch in his nose gag. Good luck, Mr Pie!
Quote: ShoePie @ April 17 2010, 12:45 PM BSTlol, that's great
I might nick that if that's OK?
Of course. I wouldn't have suggested it if I minded you using it.
Quote: Badge @ April 19 2010, 10:42 PM BSTIt's a cracker. The concept is so good you can do even more with it.
I agree. It's pretty easy to imagine follow-up sketches:
Falling attendance means he's having trouble with the upkeep and as a result he's in a battle with Tesco who want to build a supermarket on his head instead.
The troubles he's having finding somewhere on his body to build adequate parking facilities for the football ground. Or perhaps reveal that he has the car park for it on his shoulder somwhere and the hassle he's having with his weekends being disrupted by them holding car boot sales there on Sundays.
He's being fined by the FA as, in a crucial match, he accidentally tipped his head forward, tilting the whole pitch causing the ball to go rolling and scoring a controversial winning goal.
Like it. I agree with Mr Bussell re live action being the way to go. Maybe an extra line:
People often say to me, 'Brian. It looks good now, but what will it look like when your 65? That's why it's in black.'
Also like the idea of him sticking his finger up his nose - the tannoy starts to feedback, he pokes his finger in his ear, the floodlights go off, pokes his other ear, lots of quick cuts.
But I thought this was going to be about the famous TV producer Brian Park.
Quote: Afinkawan @ April 20 2010, 10:20 AM BSTI agree. It's pretty easy to imagine follow-up sketches:
Those are great ideas, I particularily love the Tesco one. I may look into doing more if the animation process goes well.
Quote: Simon B @ April 20 2010, 10:23 AM BSTAlso like the idea of him sticking his finger up his nose - the tannoy starts to feedback, he pokes his finger in his ear, the floodlights go off, pokes his other ear, lots of quick cuts.
Now I'm going to have to make an alternate ending!
Quote: Dolly Dagger @ April 20 2010, 10:28 AM BSTBut I thought this was going to be about the famous TV producer Brian Park.
Heh, I didn't know there was one. I hope he doesn't do comedy or I may get blackballed!
Thanks for all the comments everyone 
Now the hard work of not cocking it up begins!