Hey all. Hope you guys don't mind me flinging up some of my cut aways for feedback?
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Lois
Peter, do you know what day it is today?
Peter
Erm. Friday
Lois
Yes. But, do you know what the occasion is?
Peter
Thursday. Wait. No. Tuesday
Lois
It's my birthday!
Peter
Well why did you ask me if you knew what day it was. Sheesh Lois that's so stupid.
Lois
You forgot my birthday didn't you
Peter
Lois. How long have you known me? What? 5 maybe 6 somethings
Peter puts his hand around Lois
Peter
Let's just look at that wonderful plane in that beautiful sky and see what happens
A plane flys over releasing a smoke message: "Peter loves Lois forever"
Lois cuddles into Peter
Lois
Awe Peter. I love you too
Cut back to the plane still relaying a message while Peter and Lois cuddle
"If you see this Madonna. Call me."