We made this over the weekend - sorta as an exercise - if you'd have a look and tell us your first impressions and then overall critique that'd be great.
Please feel free to be critical (maybe not on the YouTube page tho!) - the help is always great!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5AenO6f9kso
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Really liked the style of the sketch, it was acted really well by the two of you and it was very funny. Perhaps a minute or so too long but I still enjoyed it all
"Same size as tadpoles, one in each"
Cheers pal, glad it kept you watching really. We added the photos to some unused improvised radio bits. I'd still like to get a more rounded plot - with a proper climax but it's perhaps not worth reading into too much.
Ta!
Frank Mohanrich x