Hi All,
as you can see, I'm very new to posting on this site. I'd like to get involved more but it's always quite daunting for a newbie.
So I thought maybe the best way was to put something of mine up here first. So here goes...
All feedback graciously received,
thanks
INT. HOSPITAL. MACHINES GO BEEP AND BING. LUCY PUFFS AND PANTS. SHE SCREAMS.
BEN:That's it sweetheart. You're doing great.
DOCTOR:Come on Lucy. One more push. I can see it now. We're nearly there.
LUCY SCREAMS, EVEN LOUDER THAN BEFORE. BABY CRIES.
BENh my gosh. It's absolutely beautiful.
LUCYBREATHLESS) what is it?
BEN:it's an iPhone.
LUCYAGITATED) I can see that but what--
DOCTOR:It's a 3GS.
LUCYh Ben, did you hear that?
BENTO DOCTOR) It's what we really wanted but, you know, you don't like to say do you? At least not before--
LUCY:Can I hold it?
THE IPHONE SCREAMS LIKE A BABY.
DOCTOR:Let me just turn it down a bit…
THE BABY'S SCREAMS GET QUIETER.
DOCTOR:In fact, let's just download a different app…let's have a look here…
BEN:How about some Kanye?
DOCTOR:Here we go.
EVERYTHING I AM BY KANYE WEST
DOCTORver to you… Mum.
THE DOCTOR PASSES LUCY THE PHONE.
LUCYh Ben, it's got your interface.
BENPROUDLY) Do you think?
DOCTORURGENTLY) Hold on, we're not finished yet--
LUCY SCREAMS.
DOCTOR:That's it Lucy, keep pushing. You're almost done.
LUCY STRAINS
DOCTOR:It's a… Palm Pre.
LUCYOVERWHELMED) One of each! Oh Ben, it's all our Christmases come at once!
BEN:I love you Lucy. You've made me the happiest man in the world… Or should that be… App-iest?
THEY ALL LAUGH HYSTERICALLY
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