I've been absent for a while but is this IT David a well-known troll?
Focusing on the sketch - great work, I will go along with The Busseller's comment about ending it on the practical joke line. But it was well acted, well shot and most of all funny. Congratulations.
Quote: Chopz @ November 16 2009, 12:46 AM GMTI've been absent for a while but is this IT David a well-known troll?
How could you even suggest such a thing!
No he isn't. Moving on please!
Quote: Tim Walker @ November 16 2009, 12:23 AM GMTAnd no-one has mentioned the 'homosexual guardsman and Private Godfrey' episode of Dad's Army either.
Don't you mean the 'homosexual guardsman and Godfrey's privates'?
Whatever, it ended up with a cucumber sandwich.
Good sketch by the way. I'm a bit out of line with popular opinion because I like the jumping out of the window coda.
Well done Simon. I enjoyed this, including the ledge bit.
As with most things you could change the ending. I liked Tim's suggestion of (in my head) Monty Python style women shouting up about his 'fall'.
But it works as it is.
Quote: Chopz @ November 16 2009, 12:46 AM GMTI've been absent for a while but is this IT David a well-known troll?
He's not well known at all.
Nice sketch! The practical joke line was easily the funniest bit for me 
In this case I think adding the final quick joke on the end doesn't take anything away from it. Double Tap the audience if you will.
I like it Simon B!
Quote: Griff @ November 16 2009, 8:16 AM GMTI'm certainly bored of humouring him now.
Me and you both Griff. Me and you both.
Fortunately I took the precaution of researching the apparrent comedy plays Nighty Night before Dawn purchased them and from what I understand it is quite clear you were trying to make me buy what I can only describe as glorified pseudo masochistic pornography.
Quote: IT David @ November 16 2009, 5:13 PM GMTMe and you both Griff. Me and you both.
Fortunately I took the precaution of researching the apparrent comedy plays Nighty Night before Dawn purchased them and from what I understand it is quite clear you were trying to make me buy what I can only describe as glorified pseudo masochistic pornography.
I agree with IT David.
My very good friend was an ice cream man, he was found dead in his van covered in hundreds and thousands, rasberry sauce and a flake in his ear. He had topped himself.... I did not find this funny at all !
Loved the sketch, but I do agree that it could've ended on the 'practical joke' line.
Well acted and shot.