Hi, I'm Marc and I've just registered. I've been writing for a while now, but only recently tackling the art of comedy. I've got a few sketches that I need feedback on - real feedback, not the kind you get from friends and family.
So if you're feeling bored, pop on over to my place and tear my work apart. It's the only way I can see what's working and what's not.
Cheers,
Marc.
Where is your place? Is it made of Gingerbread? Does it have a mysterious basement with a deep pit and a hose for those who won't put the lotion on their skin?
Oh and hello?
Stick em in critque, we're always fair, but not always kind...
Hi Marc
Hello there.
We know there is one more...does this mean there are another 73 more somewhere?
Quote: bigfella @ November 13 2009, 7:31 PM GMTHello there.
We know there is one more...does this mean there are another 73 more somewhere?
No bigfella; it means there are another 72 somewhere.
Quote: Morrace @ November 13 2009, 7:35 PM GMTNo bigfella; it means there are another 72 somewhere.
Bigfella = History 10/10
Arithmetic = 0/10
Hello, welcome, and suchforth.
Evening.
Thanks for the welcome guys; 74 is year of birth, to bring that mystery to an end. I've popped a couple of sketches in the critique booth called, Call Centre Sketch - original eh? - and Think Tank.
Show no mercy.
They won't. Good evening.
Hello Marc P.
Welcome aboard the boat of love, actual man love.
This isn't really a comedy website, PM me for details. Im off junction 32 on the M40.
'I'm not usually this forward'
Hello, Marc.
Welcome to the barracks!
*curtsies*
Quote: sootyj @ November 13 2009, 7:21 PM GMTStick em in critque, we're always fair, but not always kind...
Cruel to be kind.
Greetings.
I don't know... it's like waiting for a bus.