Hi,
Interested to hear any comments on this one.
Thanks
John
Purple Comedy
http://standupcomedy.podomatic.com/
The Call
Radio sketch
John Burns
INT-FLAT–DAY
SFX: SHOWER RUNNING
SFX: PHONE RINGING
ChrisIn shower, calling) Dave! (Beat) Dave! The phone! (Close) F**k
SFX:GETS OUT OF THE SHOWER
Chris:Answer the bloody phone!
Dave:No leave it.
Chris:I'll get it.
Dave:No, no don't! It'll be Andy.
Chris:Andy?
SFX: PHONE STOPS
Dave:It's Debs, she's left him.
Chrish God no! He worshipped her. What happened?
Davehe had a bit of a fling.
Chris:Fling?
Dave:A one night stand, nothing serious really.
Chris:God he'll be so hurt. I have to call him...
Dave:I wouldn't.
Chris:Why not?
Dave:Well...he'll go on and on.
Chris:He needs us! Why didn't the answer phone cut in?
Dave:I put it off, he'd only leave a message and...
Chris:And you can't be arsed.
Dave:You know what it's like, people split up you have to listen to all that drama, better he just gets over it.
Chris:I have to speak to him, I'm calling back
SFXHONE DIALLING
Dave:No, honestly I ...
SFX:CHRIS ANSWERS
Chris:Hi Andy. I heard, I'm so sorry. (Pause) Dave told me. (Pause) What? The bastard! The absolute bastard! I'll call back.
SFX:HANGS UP
ChrisPause) You shagged her!
Davenly a bit.
Chris:A bit!
Dave:I was pissed (beat) and it was raining.
Chrisebs, the light of Andy's life and you...you absolute complete f**king bastard. His life's in ruins. I'm going round.
Dave:To Andy's, why?
Chris:No Debs, it can't be easy for her.
Dave:Easy for her? (Beat) Wait a minute. Just a minute.
Chris:What?
Dave:I know your game, you're going to go round to her now, before the emotional paint's dried and slip in there like the little horny toad you really are.
PHONE RINGS
Chris:Andy! Dave, yes he's here I'll put him on.
Dave:F**k no! Hi, Andy.
Chris:Bye !
Dave:C**t! No, not you Andy, not you.
Ends