Roodeye
Thursday 22nd October 2009 10:47pm [Edited]
255 posts
Tursiops
Friday 23rd October 2009 3:57am
Welwyn Garden City
9,788 posts
A promising start. The jokes spring naturally out of the dialogue without sounding forced, and are driven by the characterisation. And I Iike the title.
KDancin
Friday 23rd October 2009 9:44am [Edited]
23 posts
I thought it was very funny. Good job
