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The degree of obviousness you give a gag Page 2

Quote: Ronnie Anderson @ October 11 2009, 7:23 PM BST

True, but when it's subtle and obscure you're f**ked.

MORRACE: How was it for you darling?

MRS MORRACE: Subtle and obscure.

Quote: Ronnie Anderson @ October 11 2009, 9:10 PM BST

I know but I have realised that maybe comedy has to lose a bit of subtely for enough people to find it funny.

I was involved in a comedy project a few months back and it was written too much towards mine and my co-writers taste (which is very subtle comedy) and as a result some people loved it and proceeded to stalk us (which was very nice) however a lot of peoples response was 'I didn't get it' hence we lost any chance whatsoever of building up a following. I'm not saying it was brilliant but I know we were capable of writing something more obviously funny and perhaps getting more interest.

What's your definiton of a subtle gag? Example...

Quote: Steve Sunshine @ October 11 2009, 7:19 PM BST

But there's a difference between a line that's subtle & a line that's obscure.

I don't get this.

Quote: Badge @ October 12 2009, 2:29 AM BST

I don't get this.

I suppose a "subtle" gag would be one that's understandable to everyone, but won't necessarily be noticed on a first viewing. Whereas an "obscure" gag is one that will contain a reference that perhaps only a small minority of viewers will "get" and therefore find funny.

To me, this is all so much semantics. You can put in as many subtle/obscure gags as you want, but if the audience ain't laughing then you've not done your job properly. I don't think that in any way means you should believe you have to underestimate the audience.

Quote: Tim Walker @ October 12 2009, 2:39 AM BST

I suppose a "subtle" gag would be one that's understandable to everyone, but won't necessarily be noticed on a first viewing. Whereas an "obscure" gag is one that will contain a reference that perhaps only a small minority of viewers will "get" and therefore find funny.

To me, this is all so much semantics. You can put in as many subtle/obscure gags as you want, but if the audience ain't laughing then you've not done your job properly. I don't think that in any way means you should believe you have to underestimate the audience.

I don't get this. ;) I was just being obscure. Or subtle.

Well there's no need to be obtuse(?). Unimpressed

Quote: Tim Walker @ October 12 2009, 2:57 AM BST

Well there's no need to be obtuse(?). Unimpressed

An acute observation.

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Quote: Tim Walker @ October 12 2009, 3:00 AM BST

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Is that your reflex reaction?

etc etc

*Leaves thread before it all becomes protractored*

Now you're just obsfucating, sir! Angry ;)

Felicitations Badge! Wave

Quote: Badge @ October 12 2009, 3:03 AM BST

Is that your reflex reaction?

etc etc

*Leaves thread before it all becomes protractored*

:D

Quote: The Giggle-o @ October 12 2009, 3:06 AM BST

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Quote: Tim Walker @ October 12 2009, 3:07 AM BST

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I'm struggling to use my new protractor, but I suppose it's a learning curve.

Subtlety - Earl Grey
Obscurity - Monkey

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