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INT. MEETING ROOM. DAY.

A BUSY MEETING IS TAKING PLACE THERE IS MUCH HEATED DEBATE. SUDDENLY THE DOOR BURSTS OPEN AND A SLIGHTLY DISHEVELLED MAN.

HE IS CARRYING A PIECE OF PAPER THREATENINGLY, HE SLAMS IT DOWN ON THE TABLE.

MAN (SHOUTING)
This is BANG out of order, Charles.

WE ZOOM TO THE PIECE OF PAPER. IT READS NGAB.

END

Really like that Danny.

Excellent Laughing out loud

Yep a good one! :D

That's kind of brilliant.

Very dogo!

Yes, very good.

Have an extra air hole in your box tonight.

That's two now, I'm spoiling you!

Brilliance. This would make a great sketch show title and after seeing it I would be hooked for life. Yeah thought it was average :)

Thanks for the kind comments guys, inspired by the 'Married to your jokes thread' as this is one I've been trying to crow bar into something for ages so thought. Why not give it, it's own thread.

Quote: Leevil @ September 22, 2007, 4:18 PM

Yes, very good.

Have an extra air hole in your box tonight.

That's two now, I'm spoiling you!

Whilst an extra hole is appreciated.. it's what your making them with that scares me.

Believe me if I used that it would be more like a sunroof.

Oh you've made tho hole already... I didn't see it until the sun shone really really brightly.

Get out of that box straight away... you'll be long enough in your box soon enough! ;)

That really put a smile on my face. Great sketch.

Never let it be said we don't take our time over somethings.

Three years after I wrote it, we realise the sketch here

This has also been entered into the Yobi Laugh competion here

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