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I thought I'd share this.
I certainly learnt something - you might get something from it too.

I've been hawking a screenplay around for several years (it's first inception is actually dated 2003).
Initially it received some nice comments - well written, nicely observed etc etc
I even had a bit of interest fronm a 'star' who wanted to get involved.
And, to be honest, it got me an agent, so it did alright for me.
It continued to be sent out - but always getting 'nice, but...' sort of comments.
To be honest I'd pretty well filed it away.
Then, from nowhere, some interest.
A reputable producer, with a company that had a good track record, liked the screenplay.
I took a meeting - he was very keen.
He agreed to take it away, let his business partner read it then get back to me with notes.
I waited a long time for these.
When they arrived they were broad reaching to say the least.
Whole swathes of the script would need to be discarded - new characters invented, new plot lines developed.
I was devastated.
I knew this script so well that I couldn't imagine it any other way.
BUT I sat down and looked at it.
It was like walking off a cliff.
After a really difficult week I had a breakthrough - things began to fall into place.
More than that, it got better.
After 3 weeks I went back with a heavily revised synopsis.
And on Friday night they optioned the script - a better script than it had ever been before.

Two lessons
1) Hang in there
2) Listen - even if at first you don't want to hear it.

Great news, Lazzard! :) Well done with that and hope to hear more about the project in the future.

There's two ways to re-write after being given extensive notes. You can either do it grudgingly (resenting these people who misunderstand your work) or, in the spirit of adventure, look at it as a challenge. Guess which approach yields the best script in the end? ;)

Well done Lazzard. Good advice too.

:) Great to hear it! Hope it continues to progress. Good reminder of important lessons to learn re: improving.

Way to go! :)

Congratulations to you. :)

Congrats Lazzard, great news.

Quote: Tim Walker @ October 4 2009, 11:35 AM BST

Great news, Lazzard! :) Well done with that and hope to hear more about the project in the future.

There's two ways to re-write after being given extensive notes. You can either do it grudgingly (resenting these people who misunderstand your work) or, in the spirit of adventure, look at it as a challenge. Guess which approach yields the best script in the end? ;)

The first one, right? Riiight?

P.S. Well done Lazzard.

Thanks.
It's hard to take criticism - even when,at it's heart,it's positive.
Definitley a lesson learnt.
Sometimes when guys post stuff on here and get consistant, negative feedback, yet still they defend it, you wonder if they're ever going to get the message.
Confidence is one thing - cocky-ness gets you nowhere.
I'll keep you posted - many a slip twixt cup and lip etc etc

Excellent. :) Good luck with that.

And yeah, it is hard to accept changes required from producers when the current story, character, etc all revolve arund your original idea.

Good to hear, well done! I thought that story was going to finish with "I told 'em to get stuffed" :)

Well done, Lazz! Great news! Hope it goes from good to better!

:)

Dan

Well done & good luck with it.

This is brilliant news Lazzard and very encouraging.

Keep us posted.

:)

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