Quote: James Cotter @ September 10 2009, 8:55 PM BSTvery much the Ricky Gervais school of comedy.
Oh, is he an influence then?
Quote: James Cotter @ September 10 2009, 8:55 PM BSTnot really. I watched the episode the other day for the first time in a month
What self-control you have.
Quote: James Cotter @ September 10 2009, 8:55 PM BSTfound many of the jokes funny but too subtle at times especially Keith segments.
A continuing defence of yours is that your humour is too subtle for us comedy philistines to notice. Is there just a tiny possibly that - if so many people cannot see these subtle gags - they may just be a figment of your imagination, James? There is a difference between admirable self-confidence and delusional arrogance. Pretty much everyone who has taken the time to offer you constructive criticism (such as Marc P) is essentially dismissed as wrong. It may not be obvious to you that this is how you respond to criticism, but I'm afraid it is true.
I would urge you to spend some more time learning the craft of writing and less time in self-promotion at this stage. Best of wishes.