Okay, not sure what this is yet, just started writing it? It's only three pages long so far, but I think some of you will appreciate the situation my protagonist is in.
Just want some general comments, please. Do you think it's funny, interesting?
PDF Version - http://www.leevil.co.uk/Untitled4Now.pdf
TXT. Version - http://www.leevil.co.uk/Untitled4Now.txt
Aren't I considerate? 
Thanks.
I really like it! I especially like the bit about the flier and the junk mail-its just SO typical! Really good, imho!
Loved it
Thanks Scats and Jude, have a lollipop!
Isn't that the wrong layout though?
For what?
Yep lee. Mucho Goodo.
Quote: Leevil @ September 5, 2007, 5:17 PMFor what?
A script. Isn't that the American way of laying it out?
God thats scary. Do I know you? 
It's certainly funny, had me chuckling throughout, except when i got up halfway through reading it to make a brew and check my emails. 
Quote: Seefacts @ September 5, 2007, 7:39 PMA script. Isn't that the American way of laying it out?
Yeah, it might be? I used the Half-Hour Sitcom script format in Final Draft, but it's easily changed.
Quote: jacparov @ September 5, 2007, 8:24 PMGod thats scary. Do I know you?
It's certainly funny, had me chuckling throughout, except when i got up halfway through reading it to make a brew and check my emails.
Thanks, ironically I was doing the same thing whilst writing it.
Quote: Leevil @ September 5, 2007, 8:40 PMYeah, it might be? I used the Half-Hour Sitcom script format in Final Draft, but it's easily changed.
Sorry, I put the 'arse' in 'anal'.
It's okay dude, all good.
F**king bastard, tell me how to format my own scripts!