QUICKIE SKETCH #1 Page 2

A very good sketch, Danny. Well done.

I really like it

I would have gone with a worse version of the sketch than you Danny but I liked it.

Quote: dannyjb1 @ August 25, 2007, 9:35 AM

Never apologise for your opinion, it's just as valid as the other people above, all comedy is subjective.

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Good attitude.

Nice one Dan, I have put up an even quickier one!

Yeah man, good sketch. Not sure if it's intentional but the wank/wax misdirection is great.

Quote: Sam Smith @ August 29, 2007, 6:40 AM

Yeah man, good sketch. Not sure if it's intentional but the wank/wax misdirection is great.

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Once again thanks for all comments, there is no intentional misdirection. I feel either

a) People think I'm a lot smuttier than I am

or

b) I'm far too innocent

A some other reason. It's all good though.

I think you've accidentally made it better, you could even show him semi-naked from the back (on the chair) to keep the misdirection going. I think its a winner.

An excellent quickie sketch which either you love or you hate depending on the amount of corn you can stomach.

Great sketch, nothing more to add really

I too was ready for a pull-back to reveal the Mafia guy wearing a rubber glove dunked to the elbow in swarfega.