You've taken my criticism very well, Danny. And I applaud you for that; you're a gentleman.
Very best of luck with it in the future. 
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Quote: don rushmore @ July 12 2009, 10:06 PM BSTyou're a gentleman.
He is!
This is, by far, the worst camera work ever. Who filmed it!
Otherwise, the stand up was good in places. I've seen much worse. What kind of crowd was it?
Quote: ForzaCarra @ July 13 2009, 3:24 PM BSTThis is, by far, the worst camera work ever.
Sadly, the camera work is the best thing about it.
It adds a little NYPD Blue to the performance.
Some good lines in there. I laughed.
I agree.
Some funny lines in there & a very good performance considering the crowd weren't as responsive as they could have been.
Quote: Fred Sunshine @ July 13 2009, 6:46 PM BSTSome funny lines in there & a very good performance considering the crowd weren't as responsive as they could have been.
So it's the crowd's fault for not laughing?
Give it a rest don. We know your opinion now on the clip.
Quote: don rushmore @ July 13 2009, 6:57 PM BSTSo it's the crowd's fault for not laughing?
No I didn't mean it like that.
I just thought that some of the Material was quite good and on another night might have got a better response.
In the circumstances I thought Danny did well.
But that's only my opinion from what I saw on the video, and I'm not what you could call an expert.
I thought it was good Danny. Liked the Speed Dating gag.
On a more positive note Danny, I actually thought some of the material was okay.
It was your timing and delivery that let the whole thing down.
How long have you been performing, so to speak?
God I can't believe I'm doing this...
I agree with what Don says not the direct insult at your work, I think almost all comedy has potential.
Just the fact that I think there is some very good material there that is being let down slightly by your delivery, you seemed rather monotonal sometimes and felt like I had to consentrate to keep up.
Have you performed in a mirror yet Danny? Worked for me, Helps you gauge how you say things, your stance and strangely enough makes you think how you say things too.