I have recently been writing a comedy set in a supermarket called Happy Shopper, and I have just completed a synopsis for it. I was wondering if anyone willing could look over the synopsis below and give me any feedback. Many Thanks
Synopsis for “Happy Shopper”
Fresh Feeling is a Supermarket that time forgot, it survives because the locals can’t get a bus to the hypermarket outside of town. Simon has recently returned to working there, he had left at the age of 18 to go to University after completing a degree in Film & Television studies he has the depressing honour of not being able to get a job with his degree and has been forced to return three years later to his first job stacking shelves.
Kevin is Simon’s best friend from School they were inseparable until Simon left for University, Kevin preferred to stay on working and is more than happy with his position in life. Delighted that his friend has returned, he is more concerned with his attempts to woo the checkout girl Sue, however their dates are often disasters; they like each other though and are persistent to give their relationship a proper go.
Simons days are illuminated by his many colleagues in particular Russell the trolley boy who models himself on Russell Brand he actually believes he is Russell Brand. Looking for a quiet life for the time being Simon quickly finds himself thrown into the spotlight by various incidents that happen during his shifts, the first being the suspected discovery of a terrorist bomb left down the booze isle.
Thanks Again.