Have a suckle on this me luvlees, Hope we're all well and happy...
(Frank 'N' Steve)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tIxbRUZPy5o
It's the first of series I'm doing, hope you like. 
HMMMMM, throw your hands up!
Cheers guys, if you do have a peek, it means allot, as I'm sure you all know =]
John 
I believe it was Frank Arthington who said
"In a garden of Roses a Tulip would be the first to hold you gaze."
But that has nothing to do with your post.
Glad to see that Frank is the good looking one!
I didn't dislike it but the dialogue and voicing thereof didn't cut it for me somehow. Not sure why.
It's very subjective. Others may love it!
It was pretty good and I think you should deffo make more. But your last video did set the bench mark higher than this.
Quote: Leevil @ July 1 2009, 1:17 PM BSTIt was pretty good and I think you should deffo make more. But your last video did set the bench mark higher than this.
Yeah I know, script wise it certainly does,I tightend the rieghs on the funny in favour of 'in gags' hopefully, they'll get funnier as the show progresses. Thanks for your comment everyone who has commented so far!
Perhaps you could have it that the Man doesn't realise the monster is made of rotting flesh?
I've listened to that last line three times and I still can't make it out. What is Frank saying?
Bits of me are, sir, that was another worry( sound)... =]
Commented and rated on YT.
Thanks for your comments guys, the next one will address the sound issues, I'm thinking maybe a subtitle on the STEVE character.
And slaggs, I'm disappointed you that you presume my writing is so shallow and linear that I'd call a Frankenstein's monster, FRANK. lol
But, otherwise, comments duly noted... =]
Love and respect to everyone @ bsf, it's not easy being one of us. =]
Agreed, I've never found it easy being me!
Btw I had a look at your one with the aliens coming to survey Earth's entertainment. Again, I didn't dislike it but found it restrained in some way. I think you need to let the voicing fly a bit more; more passion. The guy you're having a pop at on YouTube (Fred) is totally unrestrained!
Anyways, just thoughts from an unpublished and poverty stricken writer! Probably, not worth much, my thoughts!
Good luck!
That one 'fred saves the world' was like the first cartoon we had a pop @ really, there's all sorts wrong with that piece.
Thanks for taking the time to watch it though.