Hi People, I used to frequent this forum but lost touch. I posted two of these sketch scripts a year - or so- ago. But did a series of sketches for a Uni project. Tell me what you think.
Filmed Sketches - Babysitter sketches.
The script was ok, if a bit on the 'I'm going to say offensive and horrible things & hope people laugh' side, I'm not saying it was bad though, I got a laugh from a couple of the gags! =]
Basically the biggest issue, as I see it, was the blocking of the scene, it would've made more sense for the MUM to be getting her keys out, doing her hair etc getting ready for her 'big night out', plus, that would've added some much needed movement to the piece.
not a bad piece all in all, 7 out of 10. =]