Proposal.

Basically, I wrote a sitcom whilst at uni, thought it was the dogs cock, and sent it off to the Beeb.

It came back - no feedback. Nightmare. So I thought, well let's wait 'til my writing's matured a tad.

Hopefully it now has - after seven years I've started another sit-com and I'm going to do all I can to make it right.

I don't want to paste it in the critique - would anyone fancy reading over it (only first 10 pages done at minute, so not quite yet) and, to be honest, be as savage as possible? If I can answer you, great, if not - then you're probably right.

I'll do the same back, like.

I know, I know, I could pay for this sort of thing - but apparently I'm a right tight bastard.

Ta

I could have a crack at it. I'll PM you my email.

Sure thing, but remember if anything the none public criticism will be probably be harsher.

Ta SootyJ and yup, I hope so. I can handle it.

GRRRRRRR.

See?

And Ta Kevin too!

Hey Rick,

I'll give it a read if your still looking for peeps...

Cheers Dave - I'll email you it towards end of next week - have you see the S.Wales writers thread?

I have. Sorry I was going to just gatecrash!

Ha! No problem - we will get a definite time and place on there soon!

I'll read it - and I promise I won't steal the good bits.

Quote: Chappers @ June 26 2009, 12:59 AM BST

I'll read it - and I promise I won't steal the good bits.

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I'll read it, but I can't make the same guarantee !

You're good people - I'll PM you when done.