Nicorette quickie

INT. PARTY – NIGHT

A GROUP OF FRIENDS NATTER OVER A SMOKE. STEVE ENTERS, NOT SMOKING.

FRIEND:
Want a cigarette, Steve?

STEVE:
No thanks, Mike.

STEVE PULLS A REVOLVER FROM HIS TROUSERS AND BLOWS MIKE'S HEAD OFF. SCREAMS AND PANIC.

VOICE OVER:
Help control your cravings with Nicorette Gun.

END SKETCH

A nicely economic pun.

Nice

Quote: David Bussell @ June 2 2009, 10:25 AM BST

STEVE PULLS A REVOLVER SHAPED PENIS FROM MIKE'S TROUSERS AND BLOWS HIS HEAD OFF. SCREAMS AND PANIC.

VOICE OVER:
Help control your cravings with Nicorette Gun.

END SKETCH

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You Dirty...

Quote: sootyj @ June 2 2009, 10:27 AM BST

A nicely economic pun.

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Cheers, Soots.

Quote: Minty @ June 2 2009, 11:32 AM BST

Nice

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Ta muchly.

Quote: LIME5000 @ June 2 2009, 3:10 PM BST

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Bravo!

I like it. It will either work really well or it's a good base to build upon, even for a quickie.

Not a huge fan of puns (is it a pun?) but I couldn't help but give an involuntary chuckle. Kudos to you, sir.

Bo.

Thanks, guys.

I know what you mean about puns, Bo - unless they're presented in a knowing way I don't usually enjoy them either. This I think might work because it has a level of charge not usually prsent in pun jokes, which are mostly warm and fuzzy. That was my thinking anyway.

Nice. Would work well as an advert (best in France)