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I should have spent more than 5 minutes writing it. Actually, I shouldn't have bothered posting it
Hows My Driving?
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Quote: Minty @ May 27 2009, 12:32 PM BSTAny idea what I need to do to actually get some constructive feedback on this site?
Feel kind of invisible right now
Hi Minty.
I have read it a good few times. It's a long piece to respond to especially giving constructive criticism.
I'll leave you feedback when I get a chance.
Perhaps you should consider writing one called "How's my grammar?".
Other than that, the characters sound like cardboard cut-outs of sit-com stalwarts. Also there is no such thing as a call centre that deals with bad drivers; these stickers are put on by the owners of the companies that use the vans. You should be grateful that I, or anyone else for that matter, reads beyond the dumb-blonde secretary and angry bitter boss. I can only assume you wrote this in 1975, and you're just a slow typer, in which case you're forgiven.
Quote: DIKTURNIP @ May 28 2009, 11:02 AM BSTPerhaps you should consider writing one called "How's my grammar?".
Other than that, the characters sound like cardboard cut-outs of sit-com stalwarts. Also there is no such thing as a call centre that deals with bad drivers; these stickers are put on by the owners of the companies that use the vans. You should be grateful that I, or anyone else for that matter, reads beyond the dumb-blonde secretary and angry bitter boss. I can only assume you wrote this in 1975, and you're just a slow typer, in which case you're forgiven.
There is no secretary and the brief character run down is just to give you an idea of who they are. Agreed they are stereotypical and on a second read its pretty shit, so I'm almost with you
Your wrong with your comment about the call centre's. Small companies can sign up to be part of a network and the call centre handles the calls.
Quote: Minty @ May 28 2009, 1:52 PM BSTThere is no secretary and the brief character run down is just to give you an idea of who they are. Agreed they are stereotypical and on a second read its pretty shit, so I'm almost with you
Your wrong with your comment about the call centre's. Small companies can sign up to be part of a network and the call centre handles the calls.
On a second read you agree it's shit?
So you no longer want feedback on this?
As you may have noticed there are some right 'turnips' on this forum. Please just ignore them, most comments are intentionally offensive and created to cause a stir.
Have just noticed you have taken your piece down.
PLEASE DO NOT EXPECT FEEDBACK FROM ME IN FUTURE. I WAS HALF WAY TRHOUGH WRITING SOME CONSTRUCTIVE IN-DEPTH FEEDBACK.
Quote: Craig H @ May 28 2009, 3:04 PM BSTOn a second read you agree it's shit?
So you no longer want feedback on this?
As you may have noticed there are some right 'turnips' on this forum. Please just ignore them, most comments are intentionally offensive and created to cause a stir.
Have just noticed you have taken your piece down.
PLEASE DO NOT EXPECT FEEDBACK FROM ME IN FUTURE. I WAS HALF WAY TRHOUGH WRITING SOME CONSTRUCTIVE IN-DEPTH FEEDBACK.
Craig I apologise. I take it from the capitals that your mind is made up. Thanks for taking the time to consider it.
Quote: Craig H @ May 28 2009, 3:04 PM BSTAs you may have noticed there are some right 'turnips' on this forum.
Quote: DIKTURNIP @ May 28 2009, 11:02 AM BSTPerhaps you should consider writing one called "How's my grammar?".
you're just a slow typer,
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