My sitcom

Hi all, and if your names not all, hello to you anyway

Thought you might like to have a look at the pilot of my sitcom "Flattened" which was filmed at the South Bank studios earlier this year. It's different to how I wanted it to come out but it sort of shows my humour. It's in the middle of a re-write at the mo so it'll look different if if ever gets made.

Find it on my website, www.ashbayliss.com (don't type it in Google, it doesn't work)and let me know what you think. All feedback duly noted

Cheers ma dears

Hey man - met you down at that Channel 4 'Make 'em Laugh' seminar (I was the one who stole all the wine and gave it to a tramp that looked like Justin Lee Collins).

Congrats on getting something filmed - that actress in scene two is scarily good at faking orgasms. Some good lines in there ('Do you see what they all have in common?' 'Yes, they all lived on the first floor' ). A bit too wordy though at times (actors occasionally look a little bored while waiting for the other one to finish) and I wanted to hear more of bohemian rhapsody being used to convince someone to move in with them, which was great!

Hey Simon, I remember you! Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. It's funny how everyone gather round for the fake orgasm scene! I know what you mean about it being a bit wordy, I've tried to cut down a bit on the new one. I'll put more bo rap in the new one!