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A Little Help

Hello losers:D
Don't usually post on here but I've written myself into a corner. Below is a sketch. I'm quite happy with it even if you're not. But the punch line. It's pretty shit. I need a substitute pwease. Your reward will be several virgins waiting for you when you blow yourself to smithereens in the fruit market. All the best Roscoff.

Swine Flu Burial

SCENE: Two government press officers at a meeting.

George: Morning Tarquin

Tarquin: Morning George.

George: Listen Tarquin old son we've had a directive from Gordo to see if we can't get a bit of the old bad news under the RADAR whilst there's all this fuss about this Swine Flu nonsense.

Tarquin: Swine flu?

George: Yes you know. (grunts like a pig)
(sneezes)
(In Mexican accent) You eeez looking a leetle pale gringo.

Tarquin: Ahh, otherwise known as ACD.

George: ACD?

Tarquin: Alistair Campbell Disease.

George: Ah! Good one. Anyway Tarquin I was wondering if we had anything on the old books we can sneak out whilst those journo types are looking the other way as it were.

Tarquin: Well, let me see (types on desktop) well there's those two illegal immigrants found hiding in Alistair Darlings eyebrows.

George: Oh nice one Tarquin. Anything else?

Tarquin: There's Jade Goody. She being Princess Diana's sister and all.

George: Oh yes. Her maj will be mighty pleased if we can keep that one quiet.

Tarquin: And there's the fact that Madeleine McAnn was actually run over by Prince Phillip.

George: Oh excellent Tarquin! At this rate we'll be up for a knighthood. Well that's a pretty good selection. Next you'll be telling me the Prime Ministers a one eyed Raith Rovers supporter.

Tarquin: Don't be silly George, who would believe that?

George: Oh excellent Tarquin! At this rate we'll be up for a knighthood. Well that's a pretty good selection. Next you'll be telling me the Prime Ministers a one eyed Raith Rovers supporter.

Tarquin: As opposed to a big-eared black guy from America?

That's all I've got. Sorry, I tried.

Don't apologise for trying to help. And it has in fact given me an idea. Slightly different but along same lines. Fanks!

'Next you'll be telling me the American President is black and smokes pot?'

:)

Thanks guys but kept it on a royal theme in the end.

George: Next you'll be telling me Prince Charles is married to a horse!

Tarquin: Neigh George. Neigh.

(Mind you, even I groaned a little)

Next you'll be telling me Prince Harry is really a nazi?

Well he is german?

How about "Desperately unfunny amateur sketchwriter seen flogging a dead horse on the web"?

Quote: DIKTURNIP @ May 2 2009, 8:04 PM BST

How about "Desperately unfunny amateur sketchwriter seen flogging a dead horse on the web"?

How about twat with obvious troll tendencies seeks date with the end of my fist.

Quote: DIKTURNIP @ May 2 2009, 8:04 PM BST

How about "Desperately unfunny amateur sketchwriter seen flogging a dead horse on the web"?

How about Dikturnip. Lame by name lame by nature.

Quote: roscoff @ May 2 2009, 9:26 PM BST

How about twat with obvious troll tendencies seeks date with the end of my fist.

Laughing out loud I shouldn't laugh but I liked that. As to the sketch, it did miss a clear end. Not sure about the horse pull-out but I'd say go with your instincts.

George: Oh excellent Tarquin! At this rate we'll be up for a knighthood. Well that's a pretty good selection.

Tarquin: We could slip in the biggy.

George: Whats that?

Tarquin: That Gordon ate the Lurpak man.

George: (HANGS HEAD) He never stood a chance.

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