Honest Love

INT. NIGHT.

A couple whispering sweet nothings over candlelit dinner. Romantic music playing in background.

WOMAN: Can't believe we are getting married

MAN: I know, I love you so much baby

WOMAN: Everything we have been through, building up to this, my mum and dad are going to be so pleased.

They kiss.

MAN: They will be pleased

WOMAN: Ooooo..im going to have a wedding day, I can't believe it. I'm going to be a bride.

MAN: You deserve it baby, we've been together so long and I thought it was time to ask you.

WOMAN: You have made me so so happy, I could cry.

Woman begins to shed a tear. She looks into her now Fiance's eyes.

WOMAN: I love you so much baby.

MAN: I love you too.

WOMAN: No, I love you so much. I could never be with anyne but you.

MAN: I know.

WOMAN: No, no, I just couldn't imagine being with anybody else, what about you?

MAN: Well...there's Cheryl Cole.

Music stops dead.

WOMAN: What?

MAN: Yeah, Cheryl Cole, no there's a bitch id love to blow the back doors off! Woo!...

No, the line at the end of this lacked punch and the delivery was shoddy. This seemed as though you rushed through the job.

Quote: LIME5000 @ May 2 2009, 10:33 PM BST

No, the line at the end of this lacked punch and the delivery was shoddy. This seemed as though you rushed through the job.

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I know, I wrote it in 30 seconds, sorry a litle bit drunk, and it was poor.

Leevil I have nothing but respect for your work, that was not up too your standard and im sorry ok...

IM SORRY!!!

30 seconds? I take it all back. you're typing is amazing.

Quote: LIME5000 @ May 2 2009, 10:37 PM BST

30 seconds? I take it all back. you're typing is amazing.

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Ok, maybe 45. Get off my back Limeboy.

No, rushed and shoddy. Idea is good, but needed more of an impact.

It's not about me getting on your back. It's about where do you want to go with this talent that you have. Is it just a joke to you? Or do you want a career? If it's the latter then maybe you should take your time to produce something that will stand up for many years to come.

Quote: LIME5000 @ May 2 2009, 10:42 PM BST

It's not about me getting on your back. It's about where do you want to go with this talent that you have. Is it just a joke to you? Or do you want a career? If it's the latter then maybe you should take your time to produce something that will stand up for many years to come.

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Do you think I have talent? really?

I don't actually send anything off Leevil, and I just do this as a Hobby, I really enjoy it. Do you think it is worth sending things out?

Sorry Lime..hahah

I wouldn't say it otherwise. Keep going.

Quote: LIME5000 @ May 2 2009, 10:46 PM BST

I wouldn't say it otherwise. Keep going.

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So you've read my other stuff, and like it?

Thanks for that Lime.

I wasn't so keen on this as your other stuff but that's the way it goes. Keep going.

Quote: Nigel Kelly @ May 2 2009, 10:51 PM BST

I wasn't so keen on this as your other stuff but that's the way it goes. Keep going.

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Yeah this was poor. Thanks Nigel.

Maybe:

WOMAN: No, no, I just couldn't imagine being with anybody else, what about you? It's ok babe, be as honest as you like.

MAN: Well... there is Cheryl Cole... and maybe Amanda Holden... okay, okay, that is just so crazy... what am I like? What about them both lezzin together?

Music stops dead.

WOMAN: Sorry what did you say?

MAN: Cheryl Cole gettin' it on with Amanda, you've got to be feelin' that babe! Surely, Woot!

Inspired me

Quote: random @ May 3 2009, 12:01 AM BST

Maybe:

WOMAN: No, no, I just couldn't imagine being with anybody else, what about you? It's ok babe, be as honest as you like.

MAN: Well... there is Cheryl Cole... and maybe Amanda Holden... okay, okay, that is just so crazy... what am I like? What about them both lezzin together?

Music stops dead.

WOMAN: Sorry what did you say?

MAN: Cheryl Cole gettin' it on with Amanda, you've got to be feelin' that babe! Surely, Woot!

Inspired me

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I think Cheryl Cole prefers A man to hold 'n kiss! :-)