Something I've been working on, on and off for last year. This is a zom/com feature. So I attached the draft first 12 pages would love to hear what you guys honestly think because it's not like anything I've done before.
http://greenmanmedia.co.uk/School_for_Dead09.pdf
Hope you all enjoy.
I even laughed at the very very first line - EXT. SPACE - NIGHT!!
If the rest is as good as that this is going to be incredible!
Seven pages in and enjoying it so far. I'll read the rest later.
Well, I liked it. Some really nice bits of dialogue.
One or two grammatical errors that made my blood boil but otherwise really enjoyable.
Is it a bit too soon after Dead Set? Possibly. I suppose if you want to do a zombie feature, then some things are never going to change.
Quote: shaggy292 @ April 12 2009, 3:33 PM BSTOne or two grammatical errors that made my blood boil but otherwise really enjoyable.
Agreed. But, for Gav, I didn't think it was too bad. 
Quote: shaggy292 @ April 12 2009, 3:33 PM BSTIs it a bit too soon after Dead Set? Possibly. I suppose if you want to do a zombie feature, then some things are never going to change.
Felt more like Shaun Of The Dead to me, which isn't a bad thing.
Quote: shaggy292 @ April 12 2009, 3:33 PM BSTWell, I liked it. Some really nice bits of dialogue.
One or two grammatical errors that made my blood boil but otherwise really enjoyable.
Is it a bit too soon after Dead Set? Possibly. I suppose if you want to do a zombie feature, then some things are never going to change.
Thanks mate. Yeh fair point on grammar I'll review that.
Uhh I not sure I started it before Dead Set lol! zombie films are a pain in the ass to write becuase a new one comes out every 5 days but I hope to finish it by end of summer, and start approaching people with it.
It does get a little more clever later on but you'll have to wait for that 
Quote: Nil Putters @ April 12 2009, 3:38 PM BSTAgreed. But, for Gav, I didn't think it was too bad.
Felt more like Shaun Of The Dead to me, which isn't a bad thing.
Yeh it's a bit more Shaun then Dead Set, but I have cranked up the violence a fair bit from it's orginal draft so it's a bit more urgent and less meandering 
It's awesome, Gav! I really want to know what's going to happen now!
Thank you Robyn
Posting to remind myself to read. Will edit with feedback later.