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Quote: Dolly Dagger @ April 8 2009, 1:51 PM BST

Is it because you've got an overly large head and undescended testicles? :)

I can definitely speak for the testicles.

Quote: Micheal Jacob @ April 8 2009, 12:18 PM BST

I'm with Dolly. Separate numbered scenes, and CUT TO isn't necessary. A director will do a camera script in due course. Money well spent, Dolly!

Now I'm confused. All the things I've read regarding sitcom writing has said that a scene always ends with a transition, be that CUT TO:, MIX TO: or whatever. Then I was always led to believe that a new scene starts on a new page.

I'm now feeling vulnerable. Somebody please explain ~ with pictures...

Def.

Quote: David Bussell @ April 8 2009, 3:52 PM BST

I can definitely speak for the testicles.

An interesting ventriloquist act, that! :)

Quote: Deferenz @ April 8 2009, 3:55 PM BST

Now I'm confused. All the things I've read regarding sitcom writing has said that a scene always ends with a transition, be that CUT TO:, MIX TO: or whatever. Then I was always led to believe that a new scene starts on a new page.

I'm now feeling vulnerable. Somebody please explain ~ with pictures...

Def.

That's for movie screenplays, specifically American movie screenplays. With sitcoms you can get away with pretty much whatever you like so long as at the end it looks like a script. Make it funny, make it economical and make it neat. The rest is just procrastination.

Quote: Dolly Dagger @ April 8 2009, 4:01 PM BST

An interesting ventriloquist act, that! :)

Mine rumble when I'm randy.

Quote: Deferenz @ April 8 2009, 3:55 PM BST

Now I'm confused. All the things I've read regarding sitcom writing has said that a scene always ends with a transition, be that CUT TO:, MIX TO: or whatever. Then I was always led to believe that a new scene starts on a new page.

I'm now feeling vulnerable. Somebody please explain ~ with pictures...

Def.

I've been told not to bother with CUT TO by various script writers, readers, books on writing screenplays, etc. Everyone knows the scene is cutting to a new one, so why bother? It just clogs up the flow I suppose.

Only use it sparingly in usual cases or to show MATCH DISSOLVE transitions, etc.

Quote: David Bussell @ April 8 2009, 4:02 PM BST

That's for movie screenplays, specifically American movie screenplays. With sitcoms you can get away with pretty much whatever you like so long as at the end it looks like a script. Make it funny, make it economical and make it neat. The rest is just procrastination.

Not even in movie screenplays are they needed. And I was told that by a Hollywood script reader.

Quote: Dolly Dagger @ April 8 2009, 4:04 PM BST

Not even in movie screenplays are they needed. And I was told that by a Hollywood script reader.

They're not absolutely necessary I agree, but I like to use them for certain transitions - such as when the end of one scene directly impacts on the beginning of the next.

For instance:

INT. GARDEN - NIGHT

MARY:
You really shouldn't go back to a lit firework you know.

JOHN:
I know what I'm doin...

CUT TO:

INT. HOSPITAL - DAY

JOHN IS LAID UP IN BED WITH THIRD DEGREE BURNS.

Quote: David Bussell @ April 8 2009, 4:10 PM BST

They're not absolutely necessary I agree, but I like to use them for certain transitions - such as when the end of one scene directly impacts on the beginning of the next.

For instance:

INT. GARDEN - NIGHT

MARY:
You really shouldn't go back to a lit firework you know.

JOHN:
I know what I'm doin...

CUT TO:

INT. HOSPITAL - DAY

JOHNS IS LAID UP IN BED WITH THIRD DEGREE BURNS.

Yeah, which is what I said in my post. Should be used sparingly. Why does no one listen to me properly?
Rolling eyes

Is it the speech impediment? :)

Quote: Dolly Dagger @ April 8 2009, 4:17 PM BST

Rolling eyes

Is it the speech impediment? :)

No it's impudent!

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