British Comedy Guide

Scottish Crackdown On Alcohol Sketch

Here's my sketch which got in NewsRevue this week. It's a bit obvious, but they seem to like that...

Int. Stage

A shopkeeper, who is Scottish, is stood at a desk with some beer bottles. A man, also Scottish, enters and approaches.

MAN:
Hello, mate. Could I have 3 bottles of Buckfast, please?

SHOPKEEPER:
Certainly, sir. That'll be £425.97p.

MAN:
How much?!

SHOPKEEPER:
£425.97p, sir. It's part of the Government's crackdown on alcohol – we've had to put our prices up ridiculously high.

MAN:
But I can't afford that!

SHOPKEEPER:
Look at it this way, sir. In times like these, can you honestly afford to stay sober?

MAN:
Right, that's it! I'm going!

The man starts to walk away.

SHOPKEEPER:
You're happy to let the Government win, are you, sir?

MAN:
No, I'm off to find a cash machine.

ENDS

Well done on NR. Good punchline too.

Guess it also shows that sometimes simple and to the point works best.

Short, no padding & funny. Nice one,Ben!

Nice and tight.

Oh, thanks for posting this one!

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