The Jaunty tale of Hack Jardy
I liked it, harsh but probably true 
Yes, despite the content found it very funny indeed
Gee, thanks fellas. I genuinely appreciate you guys. Really.
Hi Agent,
I read it all and thought it to be well written and engaging as a story - but unlike the others who have commented thus far, I didn't find much in the way of humour in it.
A good read but a funny one? Not sure meself. There were some wry lines right enough and they were dropped in with skill, but overall I wouldn't file this one under comedy. More sort of oddish cum surreal fantasy horror.
B
Oh yes and welcome too.
EDIT:
Just to clarify I enjoyed it.
Hmm, didn't really appeal to my humour (as Blenks has said), but can't say it's not well-written.
However,
"Hack Jardy was, indisputably, a massive bell-end."
is the single greatest first line of any story, anywhere in the whole world.
Dan
Wasn't for me I'm afraid. I didn't know what the hell was going on.
Like the others have said, I thought it was well written (although there was too much swearing I think).
Nor me - sorry
Quote: Agent Cooper @ February 5 2009, 9:42 PM GMTAuthors Note
"Tears of a c**t" is not a crass term for vaginal fluids.
Wasn't the Tears of a C**t a big hit for Smokey Robinson ?
I think he had to change the title slightly for top of the pops however.
Yeah, the swearing came as a result of trying to offend the eponymous Hack as much as possible. I like the fact that you're complementing my writing though, as well as my deeply thought out plot. That was more than I expected!
Oh and if you think its crass now, at least admire the discipline which helped me to avoid any lame 'pussy eating' jokes...
This is horrible.
Yet also strangely wonderful...
I didn't read it all, but it appears to be shit, with or without the irony.
Quote: Agent Cooper @ February 5 2009, 9:42 PM GMTA short story I wrote, parodying a friend of mine. Its a bit of an in-joke, sure, but I think there's something to be gained from it. Emotionally, morally, spiritually...
.... all three of those and more. GENIUS!!