Mines bigger than yours
I love this! Get it off the internet immediately or I will steal it.
I like this. Good and mental. The dialogue needs tidied up a bit though, you could possibly lose some of what the woman says and have her just react with facial expressions. That would add more lunacy to the doctor. It would be like he was arguing with himself and she would just be staring on in confusion and fear.
If you could add the line, "Now shut your legs ya slut." onto the end, that would make my day.
*Coy smile* Oh you.
Quote: Stuart Doherty @ February 11 2009, 7:19 PM GMTI like this. Good and mental. The dialogue needs tidied up a bit though, you could possibly lose some of what the woman says and have her just react with facial expressions. That would add more lunacy to the doctor. It would be like he was arguing with himself and she would just be staring on in confusion and fear.
If you could add the line, "Now shut your legs ya slut." onto the end, that would make my day.
Yeah, you are right about the women's role.
I like it. Especially the idea that women might boast about the size of their vaginas - not sure I've seen that before. Nice one!
Bo.
clever and funny. Liked the pace and dialogue especially
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My wife says she's got a big c**t - me.
Anyway, I love this sketch. I wanna play with it, touch it up a bit, put a little bit of me in it - like I did with your two little birdies.
Well, these are all really old sketches, so I wanna touch it up a bit (in a non-sexual way. mostly) as well. Just throwing them out there to get some feedback first. I am awful, AWFUL, at showing people anything I've done *violins*, you see I've always been told my having been ex boyfriends that I'm not funny *wipes a tear away, with a strong, determined, one might say beautifully sad hand*.
Very good but for God sake lose the TXT speak.
Yep. Nice switch, well handled.