I know it's been a little stand-up heavy recently but I'd really appreciate some feedback on this. It's basically the opening minute or so of my stand-up routine which I'll be doing in a few weeks. Let me know what you think. Thanks a lot!
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Hey guys, how's it going? I'm Andy, I'll be your entertainment for the next 5 minutes, longer if I get carried away or distracted, shorter if my girlfriend goes into labour. I'm only joking - it's not mine, so who gives a f**k?
Hopefully it's going to be a good show, but they say you can't please everyone. My ex sure came close though.
It was terrible when we broke up, she gave me the whole, "it's not me, it's you" bullshit.
I know it's not me. You're the one saying we shouldn't go out any more.
At no point did I do anything to suggest this.
If it wasn't for what you just said then, we'd still be going out. It's obviously you.
But when I first met her, for some reason I found myself gravitating towards her. She was a big girl.
At first I thought she was amazing, you know, the first time I stayed round hers, she came in in the morning with two big plates, full english. Although they were both for her.
I should have realised it wouldn't work out when I woke up that morning and realised she had to sleep on the floor as there wasn't enough room for both of us on the bed.
On our first few dates when we went out I paid for everything, although soon enough I had to enforce the rule that when we went to a restaurant, rather than me paying, we just paid for what we each had. I know I'm a student, but there's only so much debt you can get into. Plus it was embarrassing. You know when you go to pizza hut and if you don't finish your pizza they give you it in a box? On the rare occasions when she didn't finish, she asked for it in a nosebag so she could eat it on the walk home. God forbid she burn calories.
Valentine's was a bastard as well. I thought about getting her one of those big teddy bears but I wasn't sure whether she'd take it as an insult. A box of chocolates wouldn't be a present to her, it'd be lunch.