Quote: Aaron @ December 7 2008, 4:37 PM GMTI like Gary Glitter.
Another posting to be considered in my top ten personal favourites.
A Christmas Story by Leevil... Page 2
Quote: Leevil @ December 7 2008, 4:38 PM GMTexsept*
watch it boyo or you'll be banned*
You can't ban Lee! That would be like kicking a three legged kitten in the face!
Quote: Leevil @ December 7 2008, 4:34 PM GMTReally? I wasn't looking for critique, I was just bored but if you think that, then it maybe worth a try.
Seriously, don't put it anywhere. As a piece of writing it's pretty damn poor. Sorry.
Save it as a bit of fun for here.
Quote: Badge @ December 7 2008, 4:48 PM GMTSeriously, don't put it anywhere. As a piece of writing it's pretty damn poor. Sorry.
Save it as a bit of fun for here.
This is turning into critique! I liked it but if you send it elsewhere I think you may need to work on some lines. Hey what do I know?
Quote: roscoff @ December 7 2008, 4:52 PM GMTThis is turning into critique! I liked it but if you send it elsewhere I think you may need to work on some lines. Hey what do I know?
You're a bear in a hat. what don't you know?
Got to tell it like it is Roscoff, or else Leevil will think he's as good as Tim Walker.
Quote: Badge @ December 7 2008, 4:54 PM GMTLeevil will think he's as good as Tim Walker.
I can't even see that high up, never mind reach it.
Tim Walker? More like Luke SKY Walker!
Now tell me I'm not funny! 
You're an ambulance.
Quote: Leevil @ December 7 2008, 4:56 PM GMTYou're an ambulance.
Yes, I don't like to talk about it, but I've had a few sick people inside of me 
Quote: Moonstone @ December 7 2008, 4:57 PM GMTYes, I don't like to talk about it, but I've had a few sick people inside of me
I dated a paramedic once, she wasn't big enough so I had to stretcher.
*Adds to 118 118 list*
Quote: Leevil @ December 7 2008, 4:59 PM GMTI dated a paramedic once, she wasn't big enough so I had to stretcher.
Shit! I hope she was alright. Did it work?
Quote: Moonstone @ December 7 2008, 5:02 PM GMT
No, Tim Walker was the Doc